We're being moderated for Y6 writing, and I'm struggling with one child. I think there are certainly elements of level 4 in this, but I think I'm probably leaning towards a 3a. What do people think? Am I miles off? Long ago in the hot dry mountins lived a beauteful greek princess called Analise with amazing singing powers. The mountain was surounded by large rocks, the tip of the mountin dissepierd in to the clouds. Adisius a greek prince brother to the amazing princesss analise and ther beloved mother and farther called henryetti and Epamithios were king and Queen. One day while Analise was working one of the gods came down it was king Zuse saying that one of the goddesses have lost there golden harp which belongs to athino... Her extrodanery harp was on the bottom of mount olympus it was garded by a half bull and half human beast. It had horns and heary legs with strong hoves, it was strong as a rock and as mighty as king Zuse. Before long princess analise beagan her extrodanery jernoy to get the beautfle golden harp and kill the terrafuying beast... Two days past while analise set off to fined the glorius harp but then she heard a loude roare. She was finally at the bottom of mount olympus. There the beast stood, it tried to charge at her but she quickely sang a song wich made the beast fall easleep beafor he could strike at analise. After the beast fell asleep analise quickly killed the beast and found the astonishing golden harp and gave it to athina. Athina granted Analise one wish. Analise said "I wish I had an amazing husband wich, will always love me." Athina said "I will grant you the wish but after that I will have to go." Any help very gratefully received!