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Opinions on this higher tier writing response please!

Discussion in 'Modern foreign languages' started by Rich1637, Apr 1, 2018.

  1. Rich1637

    Rich1637 New commenter

    I have attached two photos of a response from a higher tier student in their recent writing mock. I think it’s excellent, however we’ve had some debate within the department. It’s Edexcel question two, marked out of 28; 16 for communication and content and 12 for linguistic accuracy. Any opinions would be much appreciated! The mark on it is my opinion but please don’t let it influence you!

    Thanks
    Rich
     

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