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GCSE Edexcel Unit 1 and 2 coursework comments.

Discussion in 'Drama and performing arts' started by Lynz2512, May 7, 2011.

  1. Hi all,
    Just wondered how how detailed are your supporting comments for the Unit 1 and 2 coursework comment sheets. I have attached below an example of 1 comment for the Unit 2 documentary response - do you think this is sufficient enough?
    The mark scheme is vary vauge.
    Thanks in advance

    Within this response ....... has analysed the process undertaken in a well structured and clear manner. Her evaluation of the work of others is excellent and is supported by clear examples using subject specific terminology. She shows a clear understanding of the play through her analysis of the activities undertaken as well as a clear appreciation of how the Medium and Elements are used to interpret the play as a whole.
     
  2. This looks good to me
     
  3. similar to me. not taking risks linking to the wording of the criteria
     
  4. Similar to mine! :)
     
  5. Phew only another 19 to write then :-/
     

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