Well...erm...I'm not sure what to say really. My grandmother always said that if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all. Has it been done using Frontpage by any chance? The pixellated rollovers give it away. I have to be honest, it looks a little dated, like something I'd have expected from a Geocities site back in the late 90s. Design has always been my weak point, do you have an art teacher who could look over it for you? I'll try and think of some constructive points and come back. Perhaps changing the font size to something other than massive comic sans would be a start. And whatever is supposed to be at the bottom of the Year 5 page doesn't work, it gives a "URL not found" error. Have you tried a CMS like Joomla?