Would anyone be willing to check my CEDP transition point one when I have finished it please? It needs to be about two pages long and I am currently typing mine up. I just want someone to have a quick read through it once I have finished please, before I email it to the university. I would love some feedback and for some suggestions for how I can improve it. if you're willing for me to email you it when I'm finished (shouldn't take me long) to have a quick read through for me, I'd really appreciate it. Please post a reply if you're willing.