Hi I've been finding the threads on levelling pieces of writing really helpful recently and would be interested in any thoughts on the following two stories, both written by Y2. We 've been reading The Highway Rat by Julia Donaldson and the children acted out and then wrote their own versions. I'm reasonably confident on level 2 for both but am unsure whether 2C or 2B. One horbul day ther was a nasty greedy rat he steels pur pepuls food. And eats it all to him self heys greedy! the next day he was going for a rid on his hors to get some food. he sor a duck Just as he got her food the big bad mous kame he "sed stop". No! so they had a fight the big bad mous kickt him "ar" he ran away. they all got his food and had a party to the end. The highway rat and the big bad mouse. One upon a time there was a rat he was a highway rat he was a greedy, selfish meen. and he stol evron food evern his horse food then he had a sowd. He also stul rotern FOOD! Then he went into his cave and et the food then he was fat. The next day he rode his horse the he went up up up up and up on the mounitains then he met a big bad mouse and he said fee fo so I smell a english man then he pushed the highway rat then he was very stuck then the stick snal he landid on his horse the he fell out. and he had a work to do swep and mop the floor and he had a children like yorsome thing they had cake and some tretch. The end. Thanks for taking the time to read and in advance for any replies.